Professional Profile re-write – Example 1

 

 

 

BEFORE

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AFTER

Trust, honesty and integrity are not just words to  Jane. When entering the real estate industry over ten years ago, her daughter joked that she’d probably fail for being too truthful. In reality, it’s that virtue which has seen Jane develop hundreds of successful relationships with her clients, consequently achieving recognition as a premium salesperson for the last two years running. Prior to that, Jane earned a highly coveted spot in the quarterly top twenty salespeople within the Northern Region, during the height of the toughest real estate market in living history.

Jane understands that selling your property is one of the most crucial transactions that you’ll face in life and uses her extensive background in banking and administration to add enormous value to the level of skill and care you’ll receive, which in turn will secure you your best possible outcome.

When asked what sets her apart, Jane replied “Honesty, skill, and dedication to getting the job done to a very high standard. It doesn’t matter how long it takes or how hard I have to work, the positive end result is my only focus”.

A local through and through, Jane was born in _______ and grew up in and around ______, ______ and ______. She has an affinity with the people and their cultures which is enhanced by her intimate knowledge of the geographical area. Her commitment to her community is endorsed by ten years of local charity work, including regular volunteer work for night patrols with the ______ Community Crimewatch and annual Cancer Society collections.

Jane’s personal mantra is a Thomas Jefferson quote: “Honesty is the first chapter of the book of wisdom’ and she lives by it.

 

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